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Thursday, 30 November 2017


selfie cat writing

WALT: write a story in detail (3 paragraph long)

We watched a video about a little girl that wants to take a picture of her cat because she is losing on insterat. She tries to take a photo but the cat attacks her. Here is my story about what happened. I hope you enjoy reading my story.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous1 December 2017 at 12:25

    This is really good writing Gabbie I love how you describe you and your cat on the slide.it is a really good description. I also like the part how you make the writing colourful than my writing that is black and white. But next time I can help you with making your ideas bigger if you want. How long did it take you to do this

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  2. Anonymous20 December 2017 at 14:23

    Hey Gabie,

    This is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey blogging team 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!

    I really love how you made your story into a slideshow! This format makes the story even more exciting and interesting for the readers to read! I really liked the idea of having instacat! I would love to read more of your stories and writings!

    How about checking out the cool activities on the Summer Learning Journey website? To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.

    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!

    All the best,

    Jade C.

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