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Today I am showing you some writing I have done for the past couple of weeks. I have been working on writing with a sense of place I haven't quite finished it but here it is
The Best Holiday
Everyone was laughing really loud and all I could hear was people slurping their coffee at the cafe and the roller coaster clicking against track.
I went to rainbows end. When I went there it was really hot I went on so many rides.I was having so much fun I went with my aunts friend and her son there names where jordie and lennett. Jordie was like a brother to me he was there when I needed him he would go on all the rides with me and encourage me to go with him on the rides that he went on .
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