Hi and today I am going to be talking about my whriting that I have been doing with my literacy group I had to write a paragraph to support our topic sentece but her it is.
.I like food.One day I went to my nana's house and she gave me my favorite caramel chocolate chip cookies and I couldn't help myself and ate more and more until I felt sick.But I think I ate too much.But as I was going down the hall my sister was behind me and I slipped on a banana peel and fell on her.
thank you for reading bye.
Thursday, 23 August 2018
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Good morning Gabrielle, I like how you wrote about eating chocolate cake and how you felt AFTER eating the cake. I like eating cake, especially banana cake. Maybe next time when you do a blogg you could add some photos of cake. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeletethank you mrs casdidy
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