today I will be sharing with you my writing that I did in my hotspot
here it is
Punctuation
Know what each piece of punctuation does/ is for:
- Full stop
In the holidays I went to my nanas.When I got there I went to my friends house to stay the night and we
went out for dinner. When we were going through the drive through I fell out of the car as we were
paying for the food because I was paying for my food with my money that I earnt.It was really funny
but the lady on the other side helped me up and I was a bit angry that I am sort and can not reach.
But after that I started laughing but when I went to bed I was still laughing.
went out for dinner. When we were going through the drive through I fell out of the car as we were
paying for the food because I was paying for my food with my money that I earnt.It was really funny
but the lady on the other side helped me up and I was a bit angry that I am sort and can not reach.
But after that I started laughing but when I went to bed I was still laughing.
Can I please have some feedback bye and thank you.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Gabbie,
ReplyDeleteI like your writing, but don't forget your full stops and a capital letters. That hurt so bad when you fell out the car. Bye that's all.