Hi awsome people welcome back to my blog and I hope you will enjoy my post.
So today I will show you my writing that I have created using a picture promt. I have re read it heaps of times. It was really hard because I have been working on this for a while now, it took a long time and I didn't know what to write, but I ended up finishing it.
My picture was a crashed plane.
here is my awsome writing
The famous explorer
One day a famous explorer found an old plane that had animals living in it like monkeys,lions,and others.It was in a scary jungle with scary trees. As he was exploring he saw a strange person he thought that the person was the pilot because he had the most damage and he had the rest of the people from the plane crash there. It looked like he had hit his head and went crazy and it was scary because he had sent all the people to come and get The famous explorer.The famous explorer screamed AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH And he ran as fast as he could go.
Please comment and give me some feed back on my writing bye.
The famous explorer
One day a famous explorer found an old plane that had animals living in it like monkeys,lions,and others.It was in a scary jungle with scary trees. As he was exploring he saw a strange person he thought that the person was the pilot because he had the most damage and he had the rest of the people from the plane crash there. It looked like he had hit his head and went crazy and it was scary because he had sent all the people to come and get The famous explorer.The famous explorer screamed AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH And he ran as fast as he could go.
Please comment and give me some feed back on my writing bye.
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